I'm still working on the second part of Among the Clouds. For now, please enjoy this piece. As always, if there is any unfamiliar word, please feel free to use www.dictionary.com
The Three Flowers by Adrian AchyarStanding on the veranda
On the second story of my house
Looking at the rooftops
Cool breeze swept my face
People walking
Peddlers peddling
Adults chatting
Children playing
Ah! How beautiful this life could be
The sun was shining
Warm lights seeping
Soft light upon trees
Upon lush leafs
Upon potted plants
Upon flowers
The three flowers
The purple flowers
The soft green leafs
The light brown stem
A beautiful piece of scenery
The glory of a creation
It all would soon be gone
The purple crown would fall
The lush green leafs would wither
The light brown stem would snapped
It all would fall to the ground
Back to dust
As I gazed upon the three flowers
A thought came into my mind
How fleeting this life could be
Sunday, 22 July 2007
Guys, please read my stories and other poems at K.com ^_^
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walaupun pemakaian kata2 nya... biasa ja...
tapi setelah aku baca berulang2 kali...
puisinya punya.. arti kehidupan yang mendalam..aku bner2 kagum... :D
:) hbad bgd ya kamu..
tlis puisi dlm bhs ing.
slut..!!! q ska puisix.. kykx shakespare kalah nich..!!
i like this part :
It all would fall to the ground
Back to dust
overall, what a nice poem O:)
keep writin' =D>
keren,,apalagi ditulis [pake bahas inggris,,dobel keren..lu bisa bikin airmata gw merebak(tsaahhh),,haha,sumpah keren..gw punya YM ko,,add aja yahoo id gw..kapan2 kita ngobrol ya ! very nice to know you O:)
wah...keren banget puisinya walau susunan katanya biasa2 saja, tapi secara keseluruhan puisinya mempunyai makna yang dlam.
As I gazed upon the three flowers
A thought came into my mind
How fleeting this life could be
Bait pamungkas! Di situ aku sadar arah puisi ini. Eh, kapan posting cerita lagi?
Suer jago juga bikin puisinya, salut buat kamu
adrian, i just want to say, may i studying english with u?i want to make a written in english to as you
walau bacanya agak mengerutkan kening tapi bagus juga.sayang bahasanya inggris ya.tp sedikitnya aku ngerti kok.dan
bagus bgt
ikutan aja ah biar ga ngerti tp ikut
he he he he....
nice descption
ajib ajib, walau poemnya english but oke deh
cool...
umur berapa sih??hebat banget
Shakespare kalah romantis nih..
nanti jangan lupa yah kasi komen ke cerpen selanjutnya : legend of deathlock(part two) the forgotten memories...nanti perbaiki lagi ya,maklum kalo banyak kesalahan,tulisan anak kelas 1 SMP
OK??
keep writing
sebelum nyerocos enggak karuan, salam kenal ya...
kerasa banget!
Yan.. I can feel it!
Ini puisi yang kamu ceritain ke aku kan?
Hmm.. ya, wonderful!
It all would fall to the ground
Back to dust
keren!
serasa baca sastra arab tinggi
cuma versi englishnya
ko pda pke bhsa planet c..
ne bhsa mna yaks...???
hiks...
:(
keren bro..!!!
lanjutkan perjuanganmu..
(halah)
^_^
Teman2, makasih dah mau baca dan kasih komentar. Aduh, dah nembus angka 100, senangnya ^^
The Three Fowers, Among the Clouds... Guys, please read my stories & poems at K.com ^_^
nice poem, picturing a life;
"It all would fall to the ground
Back to dust"
Read appeal..^-^
justice
maaf neh baru kesampean dah ngerti skrg maksdnya...
semua makhluk hdp sama akhirnya...cuman ke sampah gknya dont know!!!1
sweet, meski aga pusing juga..;)
hm.. reading yer.. poem.. gets me the breeze ^^ okay fell the changing of seaason.. but its not about season.. it about yer life huh? yeah.. as long u realize.. time will always move forward.. then u will be fully prepared ^^
COME And visit ma stories.. hey i like to write English poem 2 ^^ keep it up
a poem in english... (kamusku mana ya.. :D )
And you See everyhing
Ane jadi inget lagunya The Beatles yang judulnya In My Life... Cool
lepasin emosinya... jgn ditahan2 gt.. keren kok
Lembut...
cool poem....
analogi tiga bunga yang keren....
top dah!!
nice, like sunset... :)
^_______^
Nice life right?
nice poem...
i like flowers..
hehehehe.. :)
it's indeed very good
wa ndak begitu bagus di bahasa inggris
yg jelas sepertinya kata-katanya keren, and this is a nice poems.