Ku tak kuat lagi

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Writer imamsbd
imamsbd at Ku tak kuat lagi (12 years 1 week ago)
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weheheheeh pagi2 dah online aja, pake HP ya
katanya gak pernah pacaran, na ini kok patah hati :D
:P
:))

Writer olief
olief at Ku tak kuat lagi (12 years 26 weeks ago)
70

pengulangan kata,,,,,,,,,dipadatkan keren tuh...:)

Writer Wawan Cahya
Wawan Cahya at Ku tak kuat lagi (12 years 27 weeks ago)
90

Lam kenal jg..
:)

Writer ezra
ezra at Ku tak kuat lagi (12 years 27 weeks ago)
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yup
coba dihindari pengulangan kata dalam satu bait

salam
-sang pujangga fana-

Writer lucieferboy
lucieferboy at Ku tak kuat lagi (12 years 27 weeks ago)
80

keep writin'

Writer openk
openk at Ku tak kuat lagi (12 years 27 weeks ago)
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penggunaan kata yang sama dalam satu bait, kadang malah bukan menegaskan, tapi memberi kesan mblenger..

keep write yahh

salam persobatan

Writer silencer
silencer at Ku tak kuat lagi (12 years 27 weeks ago)
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terlalu banyak pengulangan kata.. ribet.. baru diputusin yak.?

Writer mahar_fans
mahar_fans at Ku tak kuat lagi (12 years 27 weeks ago)

oh gitu ya, hehe maklum newbie disini...^^v

Writer Armanda
Armanda at Ku tak kuat lagi (12 years 27 weeks ago)
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nice

rip8 at Ku tak kuat lagi (12 years 27 weeks ago)
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nice kawan
seperti nada melodi musik nie kwkwkwk

Writer mAsqUitO
mAsqUitO at Ku tak kuat lagi (12 years 27 weeks ago)
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hmz,,,

good ...

berkarya terus ,,

Writer echanalukman
echanalukman at Ku tak kuat lagi (12 years 27 weeks ago)
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semangad dong..!!

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