Laba-laba

Romeo :
Jangan jadikan aku tepung
yang rapuh beterbangan
walau sedikit terhembus angin
namun...
Jadikan aku sarang laba-laba yang ringan
tapi kuat menjaring dan tahan terpaan angin

Ayya :
Kau sudah menjadi sarang laba-laba
Dengan jaring cintamu
Kau menangkapku ...

16 Nopember 2008

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Writer ayuRa
ayuRa at Laba-laba (12 years 37 weeks ago)
70

haha..

yang di sms yuph??

masa ci sanny balik ngirim lagi ke w?
waduh!!

nice..

Writer ezra
ezra at Laba-laba (12 years 37 weeks ago)
80

so romantic ;)

salam

Writer strawcutestraw
strawcutestraw at Laba-laba (12 years 37 weeks ago)
80

namaku aya..

he he he

salam kenal ya

Writer Yovan Wisnu
Yovan Wisnu at Laba-laba (12 years 37 weeks ago)
90

Ma..nyusss Neng, diksi sederhana tapi sudah terasa getarannya.
Keep writing

Salam persobatan Yovan Wisnu

Writer hirokakkuen
hirokakkuen at Laba-laba (12 years 37 weeks ago)
70

dengan jaring cintaaaa????

kerasa terlalu gombal...gaya ngomong khas buaya darat...ganti dey...itu aja yang rasanya ngeganggu banget

Writer shin_nirmala
shin_nirmala at Laba-laba (12 years 37 weeks ago)

hirokakkuen wrote:
dengan jaring cintaaaa????

kerasa terlalu gombal...gaya ngomong khas buaya darat...ganti dey...itu aja yang rasanya ngeganggu banget

gyahahahaha...
iyya ci...
abis dah bingung mau pake apa,
awalnya dah laba2 ci...
hihihi
ada saran...???

Writer Chaa
Chaa at Laba-laba (12 years 37 weeks ago)
70

berharap dijadikan cerita..

Writer shin_nirmala
shin_nirmala at Laba-laba (12 years 37 weeks ago)

Chaa wrote:
berharap dijadikan cerita..

waduh...
jadi cerita...???
hm...
ada bibit ci, cuma masih ngumpulin bahan...
:)

Writer neko-man
neko-man at Laba-laba (12 years 37 weeks ago)
80

HAHAHA...
pemilihan katanya bagus

Writer mazoza ishubito
mazoza ishubito at Laba-laba (12 years 37 weeks ago)
60

Hmm... Its seems persuasion poetry.. :) keep move on..

Writer echanalukman
echanalukman at Laba-laba (12 years 37 weeks ago)
80

ehm....diedit ya?

Writer shin_nirmala
shin_nirmala at Laba-laba (12 years 37 weeks ago)

echanalukman wrote:
ehm....diedit ya?

waduh...
diedit apanya mba...???
hayyo... apanya hayyooo...
:)

Writer joe_yabukie
joe_yabukie at Laba-laba (12 years 37 weeks ago)
70

:)