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Writer siapa
siapa at . (13 years 8 weeks ago)
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Apik kang..
tapi ada yang salah ketik tuh.. :p

Writer ezra
ezra at . (13 years 8 weeks ago)
70

yup, setuju sama lifespirit
hanya alurnya saja yang sedikit kacau

salam

Writer elang_biru
elang_biru at . (13 years 8 weeks ago)
60

kayaknya judul nya kurang cocok deh..

:)

Writer queenschee
queenschee at . (13 years 8 weeks ago)
60

nice

Writer bunghatta_crb
bunghatta_crb at . (13 years 8 weeks ago)
80

Temanya bagus "Belasungkawa", tapi alinea kedua susunannya kurang beres. It's ok...

Writer lifespirit
lifespirit at . (13 years 8 weeks ago)
60

alurnya agak sedikit kacau, aspal panas.
Sehingga makna tersirat kurasakan menjadi rancu. ( opini subyektifku lho! )

Salam lifespirit!

Writer Aspal_panasku
Aspal_panasku at . (13 years 8 weeks ago)

bingung yah
...

" melayat "

Writer kemuning
kemuning at . (13 years 8 weeks ago)
70

hm.. sedih? knp? hm.. kerang gereget kamu nyampein emosinya... :D

Writer Aspal_panasku
Aspal_panasku at . (13 years 8 weeks ago)
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