Life is....

Life is like a game,
where we have to collect the score ‘til the end
Goodness is like a gain,
That can yield the reward then
Badness is like a loss,
Which will reduce the point most
Death is like a deadline,
when we have to stop to try
Angel is like the officer,
who will do their duty forever
God is like the center owner,
who will count and decide the present
Heaven and hell are like the prize,
which we will get soon later
Thus, is it wrong if I say
That world is just a timezone area?

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Writer fredster_eric
fredster_eric at Life is.... (11 years 51 weeks ago)
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Excellent.. i like it. I have nothing to say again. Keep writing!!

Writer samalona
samalona at Life is.... (12 years 23 weeks ago)
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It's a broad concept to be cover, but still worth a review, especially in k.com :)

Writer OrangMalas
OrangMalas at Life is.... (12 years 24 weeks ago)
100

ya ya ya :) i like it

Writer angel16
angel16 at Life is.... (12 years 25 weeks ago)
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kereeeeeeeeeeeen!!! suka bgt sama yang ini!! sangat sangat mengena!! (/^o^)/

Writer arv claten
arv claten at Life is.... (12 years 25 weeks ago)
90

salut.
ajarin dong....

Writer adelya_minerva
adelya_minerva at Life is.... (12 years 25 weeks ago)
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speechless gw... pilihan kata yang indah dan tepat! :)

Writer radysha
radysha at Life is.... (12 years 25 weeks ago)
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hmm timezone ya mba' yosy? mau maen dmana ya enaknya ..
hahahha .,.. really nice poem ^^

Writer kavellania
kavellania at Life is.... (12 years 25 weeks ago)
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huaaa maklum deh ibu guru ini kan juga guru bahasa inggris. keren kerennn... tapi aku bacanya malah seperti baca lirik lagu (baca terjemahan doang wkwkwk secara Inggrisku dodol)
10 ajah deh buat bu guru. *biar ntr pas ujian juga dapet sepuluh jadi ADILLLL! LOH?

Writer lyricist egi poet
lyricist egi poet at Life is.... (12 years 25 weeks ago)
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wah keren puisi berbahasa inggris salut hehe komen juga 13 film terbaik sepanjang masa ya

Writer yosi_hsn
yosi_hsn at Life is.... (12 years 25 weeks ago)

Bikin aja. Ntar jadi ada bermacam tulisan dalam berbagai bahasa di k.com ^^

Writer yosi_hsn
yosi_hsn at Life is.... (12 years 25 weeks ago)

Ya deh, dipindah..dipindah..

Writer yosi_hsn
yosi_hsn at Life is.... (12 years 25 weeks ago)

Terjemahan :

Hidup seperti permainan,
dimana kita harus mengumpulkan skor
Kebaikan seperti hasil,
dimana kita bisa mendapat bonus
Keburukan seperti kerugian,
yang dapat mengurangi nilai
Kematian seperti deadline,
saat kita berhenti mencoba
Malaikat seperti petugas,
yang melaksanakan tugas selamanya
Tuhan seperti pemilik,
yang menghitung dan membagi hadiah
Surga dan neraka seperti hadiah,
yang akan kita terima segera
Maka, salahkah kalau saya bilang
bahwa dunia hanyalah sebuah arena timezone?

Writer Onik
Onik at Life is.... (12 years 25 weeks ago)
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dasar cerpenis :))
jadi sregnya posting ya di cerita deh :p
.
satu kata Yos, inggrismu juga hebat :D

Writer yosi_hsn
yosi_hsn at Life is.... (12 years 25 weeks ago)

thanks, jeng