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Writer januari
januari at Nyamuk (10 years 26 weeks ago)
90

cukup baguuus karyanya. kept writing.
tapi... mengapa judulnya tidak Nyamuk saja, biar to the poin...
dan akan semakin menarik.
see you... sastra oh sastra

Writer edeluwis
edeluwis at Nyamuk (10 years 25 weeks ago)

pilihan pertama nyamuk enta kenapa tiba2 aku kasih judul lain, kalu emang cocok ok entar aku perbaruhi, makasih sarannya ;)

see you to...salam sastra

Writer nau
nau at Nyamuk (10 years 26 weeks ago)
60

semprot dong hahaa

Writer edeluwis
edeluwis at Nyamuk (10 years 25 weeks ago)

ea hahaha :D
salam

Writer edeluwis
edeluwis at Nyamuk (10 years 26 weeks ago)

unik dan menarik ea tq
salam

Writer gracemndr
gracemndr at Nyamuk (10 years 26 weeks ago)
60

ada nyamuk ya? :D hehehe
salam kenal

Writer edeluwis
edeluwis at Nyamuk (10 years 26 weeks ago)

iya hehe :D mana nih kritikannya
salam jua