Flower of Blood

Over the small world once I had known
There was a garden that my thought has been drown
The flowers were colored red 
Red, red like eyes of my own
 
There I pondered my lonely and sorrow of those who were lost
Under  the devotion of darkness, nothing I feel but gore and ghost
Yet the flowers were arose gracefully in the silence
Rippled with grim of gentle and innocence
 
Suddenly I heard some whispers of thrill
They were coming from the fairest red, but the voices sound like the devil
I began not to believe of uncertain madness that I feel
The Flowers were not the thing of evil
 
And from that time, incomplete limb of mine were broken
My soul only remain the abandoned hope 
But there were beauty been awoken
Harmless and never be touched in the doomed agony slope
 
The Flowers won’t stop blooming though it doesn’t rain
Their each petals show us love and pain 
No fragrance they show besides the odd
O My Flower of Blood
 
 
 

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(2344 words) posted by Ann Raruine 7 years 17 weeks ago
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Tags: Cerita | Cerita Pendek | thriller | Battle of Realms | dark fantasy | HxH | Kota Pinus
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Writer simplyjochris
simplyjochris at Flower of Blood (6 years 38 weeks ago)
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Decent try! Good job and keep on writing, Ann! (;

Writer Ann Raruine
Ann Raruine at Flower of Blood (6 years 38 weeks ago)

thanks for came by :)

Writer itsumi_y35
itsumi_y35 at Flower of Blood (6 years 38 weeks ago)
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My first language is English. This is not bad either, but some need to fix. The poem's not even touched my outer feeling. Search and you shall find the mistakes, I don't judge you, and I won't give an excellent score. Well, I don't really like this. 3 ★s.

Writer Ann Raruine
Ann Raruine at Flower of Blood (6 years 38 weeks ago)

hmm glad you mentioned it ~~ c:
mind to tell where the mistake(s) ?? cause it wasn't a random poem for me .w.)d
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and thank you for coming by ~~
#bad english is bad ~~ >_>

Writer Mhysa
Mhysa at Flower of Blood (6 years 38 weeks ago)
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excellent poem!! pesan yang ingin disampaikan oleh puisinya ngena banget!

Writer Ann Raruine
Ann Raruine at Flower of Blood (6 years 38 weeks ago)

aahhh.. terima kasih :')

Writer someonefromthesky
someonefromthesky at Flower of Blood (6 years 38 weeks ago)
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Rimanya asiiik

Emang jadi inget "nevermore, nevermore"

Writer Ann Raruine
Ann Raruine at Flower of Blood (6 years 38 weeks ago)

the death of beauty girl ~~ \o/
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makasi uda mampir kak :3