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Writer diesonne
diesonne at blank (11 years 38 weeks ago)
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aku gak terlalu pintar bahasa inggris,... cuma suka judulnya aja,..hehehe, bagus kalu dijadikan cerita,..

Writer cassle
cassle at blank (12 years 37 weeks ago)
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paling suka bait terakhir tu.. hihihi... nice!!

Writer timbuktu
timbuktu at blank (12 years 38 weeks ago)
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Good job! You must have some lucky boyfriend, and I am sure he are lucky to have you. It is hard in putting what a heart into words, but I think you managed it.

^^

Writer fatamorgana
fatamorgana at blank (12 years 38 weeks ago)
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Menurut gw sih bagus, terutama karna gw suka puisi yg ada rimanya,& kayaknya agak sulit bikin puisi bhs inggris pake rima pula...

Writer dimas_rafky
dimas_rafky at blank (12 years 38 weeks ago)
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Aq tdk bisa berkomentar byk. Karena puisinya berbahasa inggris. Tapi aq rasa tulisan ini cukup baik, walau tampak sekali curhatannya.

Keep writting,
n komen2 juga tulisanqu..