adrian.achyar : Comments

Writer adrian.achyar
adrian.achyar at (10 years 39 weeks ago)

Makasih ^^

Writer Zoelkarnaen
Zoelkarnaen at (11 years 2 weeks ago)

I gave you full points for this.

Oh crap!!! I can still feel the shiver down my spine (mrinding bos).

Gw demen dark ending model begini...

Writer cassle
cassle at (11 years 45 weeks ago)

Ide cerita udah nice, dll-nya juga udah nice semua... Hanya saja bro, bagian tertentu tampaknya terasa agak kurang suasananya, masih belum terlalu terasa soalnya.. :) Oke deh bro, ditunggu kelanjutannya!!

Writer imr_aja
imr_aja at (12 years 5 weeks ago)

lain guru lain ilmu, gpp mengganggu ... ^_^
bahasa kerennya ...
oder ticer oder nowlej, ora opo opo toh.. yo wes karepmu...

keep writing bro!!

Writer adrian.achyar
adrian.achyar at (12 years 7 weeks ago)

Syair cina ya? Hmm... Baru nyadar :D Makasih dah baca ^^
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Writer bl09on
bl09on at (12 years 8 weeks ago)

kok berasa syair cina ya bang?

adrian berkata"dasar mini oon"

Writer adrian.achyar
adrian.achyar at (12 years 9 weeks ago)

Makasih ^^

Writer djava_wong
djava_wong at (12 years 10 weeks ago)

wuiihh... semakin bagus ceritanya

Writer adrian.achyar
adrian.achyar at (12 years 12 weeks ago)

Yeps! Tepat sekali :D Makasih dah baca dan komen ^^

Writer adrian.achyar
adrian.achyar at (12 years 13 weeks ago)

Thanks ;)
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