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gue banget deh...
perhatikan keutuhan baris
jangan terlalu asyik dengan diksi indah tapi malah mengganggu makna yg ingin disampaikan
tepat, utuh dan indah
kip nulis
mungkin bakal lbih bgus kl dipisah bait perbait
jd kyk ad jln crita gt (weks.. lagi2 sok tw bgt lu za.. :d)
hwehehehehe.. semangat!!
salam kenal ;)
LUMAYAN....
Puisi yang menarik. kata-kata lugas tidak berlebihan kalau digunakan dengan tepat mampu memberikan kkuatan yang besar.