fi_peace : Comments

Writer -ViE-
-ViE- at (11 years 36 weeks ago)

hmm..hmm

Writer Mas Bambang Purnomo Sigit
Mas Bambang Pur... at (12 years 48 weeks ago)

luar biasa

Writer Penulis Buku
Penulis Buku at (12 years 49 weeks ago)

perasaan......

Writer inol
inol at (12 years 49 weeks ago)

moral of storinya, kamu ngingetin kita semua atas kesalahan2 kita & harus selalu bersyukur sama Tuhan.
* Nama Zefa di paragraf pertama salah ketik ya (pake F bukan V)? :P

Writer analogycs
analogycs at (12 years 49 weeks ago)

hmmmm... tambahin lg deh dikit metaforanya biar maknanya bisa kena banget...

lam kenal ya,...

terus berkarya

Writer takiyo_an-nabhani
takiyo_an-nabhani at (12 years 49 weeks ago)

Assalamu'alaikum
Salam kenal
Biasa aja, komposisinya klasik.
Kembangin lagi.

Writer momocino
momocino at (12 years 49 weeks ago)

aku suka puisi ini

alnya to the point bgt

semangat ya...

^^

Writer seto mada alone
seto mada alone at (12 years 49 weeks ago)

simple, catchy, standar lah..
hehehehe.xp nice try!!

Writer imr_aja
imr_aja at (12 years 49 weeks ago)

kayak little ayas yang kasmaran sepanjang musim hehehehe, pizzz!!

Writer layya16
layya16 at (12 years 49 weeks ago)

kasmaran keberapa kalinya ni??