hirokakkuen : Comments

Writer ananda
ananda at (12 years 39 weeks ago)

terlalu datar

Writer yfreet_shiva
yfreet_shiva at (12 years 39 weeks ago)

Writer dubels
dubels at (12 years 39 weeks ago)

blm terasa gregetnya
keep try yahh..

Writer lilo
lilo at (12 years 39 weeks ago)

=D

Writer serpentwitch
serpentwitch at (12 years 39 weeks ago)

Rimanya sih lumayan dapet, cuman terasanya lebih seperti bercerita daripada berpuisi. :)

Writer man Atek
man Atek at (12 years 39 weeks ago)

dapet ...
peluk ae diem2
jok bikin kaget, hehe
- dalam bayangan kali ya -

Writer teweltjok
teweltjok at (12 years 39 weeks ago)

lebih mirip prosa ........

gaya bahasa buat yg lebih menarik ya