Luken_DC : Comments

Writer anty
anty at (13 years 45 weeks ago)

jelas sekali

Writer bukan siapa siapa
bukan siapa siapa at (13 years 45 weeks ago)

sounds cliche...
terlalu jujur kali ya?
smangaaaat!

Writer kucing_betina
kucing_betina at (13 years 45 weeks ago)

coba lagi, masih kurang greget

Writer arien arda
arien arda at (13 years 46 weeks ago)

nice try..
keep writing..

eksplore lagi ya

Writer gembelcuphu
gembelcuphu at (13 years 46 weeks ago)

wekzz...
wekzz...
wekzz...

so puitis lo,,,

tapi keren lah

Writer mr.jay
mr.jay at (13 years 47 weeks ago)

Keep Writing! Saran aja, coba mencari pengandaian yg gak klise.. Hehehe. But, It sounds great. Ada unsur optimisnya.

Writer bututbego
bututbego at (13 years 47 weeks ago)

ini pasti berharga buat kamu ya?
kalo gitu buat yang banyak.
Semangat.. semangat!

Writer Littleayas
Littleayas at (13 years 47 weeks ago)

..sama kaya dimas..hihi..coba pengantarnya dimasukkin ke dalam puisi ya...

^^
Prens read my short story & my poems and give ur comment yaaa

Part of Mine

Writer gembelcuphu
gembelcuphu at (13 years 47 weeks ago)

hm,,keren,,lu,,berbakat,,,

hehehehe,,,,luken_Dc..

lo dapet nama ntu darimana??..
dodolzzzz....

Writer dimas_rafky
dimas_rafky at (13 years 47 weeks ago)

Nice. Tp aq justru lbh tertarik pada kata pengantarnya.