Robospider_no6 : Comments

Writer keysha_luna2008
keysha_luna2008 at (8 years 26 weeks ago)

Bener juga... Klo alkohol tuch ngrusak pikiran...

Writer Riesling
Riesling at (8 years 26 weeks ago)

Sebenernya ini lucu. Agak random, tapi bikin penasaran. Tapi rasanya ada tanda baca yang hilang, bacanya jadi kurang enak ._.
Ini memang segini aja atau mau dilanjutin mungkin? xD

Writer ceritacerita
ceritacerita at (8 years 26 weeks ago)

wah
terus berkarya

Writer Robospider_no6
Robospider_no6 at (8 years 26 weeks ago)

isi sendiri

Writer adara_acariba
adara_acariba at (10 years 2 weeks ago)

bersambung kah?

Writer coolkiller
coolkiller at (10 years 2 weeks ago)

lanjutin dong

Writer siluethitam
siluethitam at (10 years 2 weeks ago)

sihir... hmmm
;)
bikin penasaran,

Writer Shinichi
Shinichi at (10 years 3 weeks ago)

saia harap ini cerita bersambung :D
membacanya serasa menonton film action-thriller ala Hollywood. meski, saia pikir POV pertama agak kurang mecing dengan genre ini. tapi, oke2 aja siy.
ehehehe
kip nulis
ahak hak hak

Writer BudakTEROR
BudakTEROR at (10 years 3 weeks ago)

Ehm.. ni cerita tentang apa y? Ak kok blm menemukan temanya...

Writer zenocta
zenocta at (10 years 26 weeks ago)

lumayan..