Robospider_no6 : Comments

Writer zenocta
zenocta at (10 years 26 weeks ago)

lanjut dulu ke 3

Writer zenocta
zenocta at (10 years 26 weeks ago)

not so bad..

Writer alcyon
alcyon at (10 years 26 weeks ago)

gak masalah, yang penting jangan berhenti belajar

Writer Robospider_no6
Robospider_no6 at (10 years 26 weeks ago)

begitu ya, maklum kak baru belajar

Writer Robospider_no6
Robospider_no6 at (10 years 26 weeks ago)

thank you baik banget ngasi 10

Writer alcyon
alcyon at (10 years 26 weeks ago)

sebenarnya tema ceritanya udah sip. karakterisasi tokoh utamanya udah manteb. cuman penceritaannya perlu banyhak belajar. keep writing!

Writer Deta
Deta at (10 years 26 weeks ago)

woow...yg ke 3nya makin seru dan ajib nih :D imajinasi yg sangat hebat salut buat kamu...tak kasih 10 point (y)

Writer Robospider_no6
Robospider_no6 at (10 years 26 weeks ago)

Waktu mau ngasih nama mata uang kepikiran Karat emas sih

Writer yuu_sara
yuu_sara at (10 years 26 weeks ago)

sesuah dgn namanya.. ceritanya jg ga jauh-jauh dr dunia robot.. karad= emas(karat), bnr ga?

Writer Robospider_no6
Robospider_no6 at (10 years 26 weeks ago)

thank maju terus