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lanjut dulu ke 3
not so bad..
gak masalah, yang penting jangan berhenti belajar
begitu ya, maklum kak baru belajar
thank you baik banget ngasi 10
sebenarnya tema ceritanya udah sip. karakterisasi tokoh utamanya udah manteb. cuman penceritaannya perlu banyhak belajar. keep writing!
woow...yg ke 3nya makin seru dan ajib nih :D imajinasi yg sangat hebat salut buat kamu...tak kasih 10 point (y)
Waktu mau ngasih nama mata uang kepikiran Karat emas sih
sesuah dgn namanya.. ceritanya jg ga jauh-jauh dr dunia robot.. karad= emas(karat), bnr ga?
thank maju terus