sandymaz_87 : Comments

Writer sandymaz_87
sandymaz_87 at (4 years 42 weeks ago)

Trims saran & masukannya...

Writer kukuhniam
kukuhniam at (4 years 42 weeks ago)

Wah, masih banyak typo bos
Gak tau kenapa, ini terasa mengganggu "Wanita di belakang terdengar memanggil mondar-mandir,"
Rasanya bikin nggak nyaman buat mulai baca, tapi subyektif sih

Writer sandymaz_87
sandymaz_87 at (4 years 44 weeks ago)

Iya... Efek terlalu semangat, perlu edit lg neeh,

Writer sandymaz_87
sandymaz_87 at (4 years 44 weeks ago)

Trims, masukannya. Next time lbh teliti :)

Writer sandymaz_87
sandymaz_87 at (4 years 44 weeks ago)

He.. He.. He..

Writer nia agustin
nia agustin at (5 years 1 week ago)

nyimak aja gan tapi kurang mengerti saya wkwkwk

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Writer Cimeyqirey
Cimeyqirey at (5 years 6 weeks ago)

Maaf koreksi harusnya Shah Jahan,, atau bukan JOHAN.. Itukan nama tokoh dunia ya,, jadii gak boyehhh sayahhh,, hehehe

Writer rirant
rirant at (5 years 7 weeks ago)

Misi mampir nyimaak, mau kasih saran dikit yah, ada salah pilih kosakata di -> 'degub', harusnya -> degup kalo kita lihat di artikatadotkom. But overall cerita menarik, salam kenal :D

Writer sandymaz_87
sandymaz_87 at (6 years 19 weeks ago)

Terimakasih. :)

Writer MeSha
MeSha at (6 years 19 weeks ago)

Ceritanya bagus..