vlotska : Comments

Writer Shinichi
Shinichi at (8 years 28 weeks ago)

nggak menarik ._.
kip nulis

Writer melanilily
melanilily at (8 years 28 weeks ago)

bagus, puisinya realistis..
ku juga pernah mengalami hal yang sama.. :)
semangat menulis.. :)

Writer ercehauliyasari
ercehauliyasari at (8 years 28 weeks ago)

bahasanya lugas sekali. terlalu sederhana menurutku, tapi tetap bagus.
keep writing! ^^

Writer Karinaawss
Karinaawss at (8 years 34 weeks ago)

nice!!!

Writer Mhysa
Mhysa at (8 years 35 weeks ago)

nice poem!!

Writer ginting
ginting at (8 years 35 weeks ago)

bau hujan, petrichor, selalu menenangkan disaat aku hampir meledak. :)

Writer pecundang jalanan
pecundang jalanan at (8 years 36 weeks ago)

banjir lbh membuat hati galau, hahahhh good job

Writer pecundang jalanan
pecundang jalanan at (8 years 36 weeks ago)

sahabat kadang lebih manjur dari obat untuk mengobati luka, nice!

Writer Michaeline FT
Michaeline FT at (8 years 36 weeks ago)

dalam hatiku sudah gak ada kamu... salam kenal...

Writer Michaeline FT
Michaeline FT at (8 years 36 weeks ago)

teman memang segalanya... good poem, keep posting