Wynfrith : Comments

Writer deathly_hymn
deathly_hymn at (7 years 25 weeks ago)

khususnya di bait terakhir penggunaan kosa kata yang terlalu dipaksakan malah membunuh nuansa puitisnya.

Writer dash300882
dash300882 at (7 years 25 weeks ago)

cool man..... how did you make this? greattt ! can i use as a rap song? hehehe

Writer Wynfrith
Wynfrith at (7 years 25 weeks ago)

LOL thanks xD
bukan kok, tenangggg... yah, belum sih tepatnya #eh

Writer Galih Pratama
Galih Pratama at (7 years 25 weeks ago)

menurutku sih udah serem (banget), malahan berasa psikopatnya.
jadi merinding. bukan pengalaman pribadi kan? hahaha....maaf becanda.

Writer Wynfrith
Wynfrith at (7 years 25 weeks ago)

Sbnr ny sih ud gabung d sini hmpr staun.. cm lg hiatus aj n lbh srg maen d cerpen wkwkwkwkw but thx anw... xD dan salam kenal

Writer ItoPamilih
ItoPamilih at (7 years 25 weeks ago)

okay, selamat datang di later.com :|

Writer Wynfrith
Wynfrith at (7 years 26 weeks ago)

Thanks xD nice to meet u too...

Writer Wynfrith
Wynfrith at (7 years 26 weeks ago)

thanks :D nice to meet u too... >w<

Writer oito
oito at (7 years 26 weeks ago)

nice poem !! :) nice to meet you

Writer nitemare
nitemare at (7 years 26 weeks ago)

NIGHT..
you use the word that i love..
XD

nice poem..
and let's the night lend us the light..

saLam kenaL..
:')